The jagged, white rocks stand still in the river
The rough river flows fast downstream
The brave fisherman fishes patiently with his fishing rod
The dark, green bush stands quietly waiting
The high cliffs stretch boldly towards the sky
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The
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Jagged, white
rough
brave
Dark green
high
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Rocks
River
Fisherman
Bush
Cliffs
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Standing
Flowing
Fishes
Stands
stretch
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Still
Fast
Patiently
Quietly
Boldly
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In the river
Downstream
With his fishing rod
Waiting
Towards the sky
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Hi Quade your poetry has inspired me to do more, you forgot to put the labels , your poem is marvelous, I like the first sentence 'The jagged white, rocks stand still in the river, ok bye
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